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The Indigo League ([personal profile] indigo_league) wrote 2016-08-22 04:03 am (UTC)

REVISIONS

You're almost there!! But before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section for Sunny.

While the brevity of the app is certainly understandable, considering the age of the character you're applying, we'd like to see just a bit more in terms of using canon examples to supplement the traits displayed! For instance, you highlight Sunny's purity; are there moments in the game in which her purity stands out to other members of the cast or the player? We'd like to see you dedicate just a bit more time to highlighting these aspects of the character!

You'll have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.

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