Before we accept your application, we'd like to see a bit more of an expanded personality section for Snake! What's present does a pretty good job of portraying a basic outline of Snake's character, but we'd like to see a bit more of what makes Snake really tick. For a guideline, we recommend addressing questions such as: What inspires Snake to want to fight for a better tomorrow, and what sort of tactics does he use to achieve that end, on and off the battlefield? In what ways does he "make the impossible possible" in canon? What are some of his strengths in battle, and what are some of his flaws? And finally, how is Snake perceived in the eyes of the other characters? Is he just some brooding loner with a violent streak, or is he respected for his prowess in combat?

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