Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section for Asa Mitaka!
We'd like to see her overall personality elaborated on just a little bit more. We know you're taking her from a relatively early point in her character arc, but we'd like to see how she feels about being possessed by a demon and her relationship with it, especially given the fact her parents were killed by a demon. Does she rebel against it? Does she reluctantly work with it? Adding this would help contextualize her current personality, even though the demon isn't with her in Victory Road! Feel free to reference examples that are further than her current canonpoint, if you need to.
You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again. Thank you!
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We'd like to see her overall personality elaborated on just a little bit more. We know you're taking her from a relatively early point in her character arc, but we'd like to see how she feels about being possessed by a demon and her relationship with it, especially given the fact her parents were killed by a demon. Does she rebel against it? Does she reluctantly work with it? Adding this would help contextualize her current personality, even though the demon isn't with her in Victory Road! Feel free to reference examples that are further than her current canonpoint, if you need to.
You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again. Thank you!