Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised personality section for Maria.

While the information is all there, we believe that proof-reading the section for spelling and grammar errors and re-organizing your paragraphs will make your points clearer and stronger. As it stands, we found the section difficult to follow and want to be sure what we learn about Maria is exactly what you want to convey.

You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.