Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised Personality Section for Tony.
We would like a slightly more fleshed-out look at Tony's personality, as most of the section seems to be slightly-rearranged statements from the Wiki. While we like that you've included examples to back the statements up, we would like more about what those examples mean for Tony's characterization. In addition, the application seems to contradict itself at times (ex: how is the character "no-nonsense" while also being described as impulsive, hyperactive, and imaginative to the point in believing in "anything" that is blatantly fictional?) and as such we'd like to see more of your personal thoughts on the character.
You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.
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We would like a slightly more fleshed-out look at Tony's personality, as most of the section seems to be slightly-rearranged statements from the Wiki. While we like that you've included examples to back the statements up, we would like more about what those examples mean for Tony's characterization. In addition, the application seems to contradict itself at times (ex: how is the character "no-nonsense" while also being described as impulsive, hyperactive, and imaginative to the point in believing in "anything" that is blatantly fictional?) and as such we'd like to see more of your personal thoughts on the character.
You will have one week to complete these requests before the character is available again.