Before we make our final decision on your application, we would like a revised Personality section for Twilight Sparkle.

We would like more detail about how the events of the movies affected her personality rather than how it affected her magical ability or control of her alternate personality. As is, much of the section seems to be talking about what happened and her magic (which doesn't really come into play in Victory Road) rather than about Twilight herself.

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